Essay France Interwar
Hace 13 años
jueves, 21 de enero de 2010
Online Relationships -- Healthy or Unhealthy?
I have never heard of online relationships. They seem very weird and probably not very healthy for you. Number one, you can't meet the person in real. Online people act much different and have different qualities. Online someone can be a cool kid, while in real life they are a nerd. It might help kids who are bullied at school, but for normal people it is not OK. I just can't explain why it is OK to date online. You just can't meet the person in real life. I don't know of anyone who has dated online. I don't know how popular it is either. It is also unhealthy, because when you break up you feel bad. Maybe in actual life you would see what a loser the other person is. It is like having a girlfriend as a wall. Don't date online kids!
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ResponderEliminarI have to say right from the beginning, way to go with the paragraph. The whole composition of the paragraph is simply perfect and I totally agree with your take on the online relations. First of all, I like the fact that you give your point of view and that you also defend it. Also, I like the way you put those real life examples, way to go!. In conclusion, I agree with your opinion and I really won't encourage you to keep writing like this, who am I to judge such an awesome job?, perfect!
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