In the video the creator of this new device was showing its purposes and new features for people to use it. While I was watching this video I was thinking to myself, this must be some exclusive technology that won't ever be cheap enough for the average person to buy. At the same time I was thinking of how useful it would be to have your own guide that does everything for you. I personally would not like to have one of these, because I am not really the high-tech guy. Of course I like technology, but I just like the simple stuff. Besides, you could attract a lot of attention to yourself. Especially if you lived in a big city, it would be the worst gadget to have.
I can't believe the things you can do with this new gadget. I mean, it's like having all of your gadgets, such as camera, phone, navigation and computer in one. This new tool is great, because you don't have to carry all of your belongings with you. It would be great for traveling. You could access the internet for email, take photos of historic icons, read the news, and so many other things. The greatest limitation of this device is not being able to use your brain for your actions. I mean this device is so smart that it almost controls your actions.
An open source is a free down loadable software. An open source means that it is open to everyone on the internet. This is good, because this way people will be able to download this software for FREE. The bad thing about having this software out in the public is there might be people that will make copies of this software. The producer of this product will have to make sure that people buy the right software and not something else. This software will turn heads on the street and set a new bar for communication devices.
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ResponderEliminarI really liked the way you write about the innovation, it makes it look very cool if i have not see the video, but i had.You have great spelling and grammer. Your essey is very good. It has very good facts about it. Your paragraph are well written. Very good.
Thomas is fantastic the way you talked about this new technology. They just invented new technology that can help humanity in many ways. This is an exclusive technology but I have the hope that one day can be accessible for all people. unfortunately this can have many bad consequences.
ResponderEliminarI have to say that you really know howe to express what you truly think. Not only this paragraph is flawless,but, I also totally agree with you. I truly support your opinion on the security issue. The fact that you involve personal opinion really is of my liking. In conclusion, you do not have to see the video to get the big picture of the technology, people just have to read your essay.
ResponderEliminarI agree with what you have to say. Your ideas are in the right place. It is pretty amazing all of the things that can be done with technology. Most people are not very interested with it, but i am. And i can see that you are to. It is very cool that it is open source. It was a great idea that he had. It is very admiring the way he came up with the invention.
ResponderEliminarWhat you wrote is the truth. The only bad thing is that you dont express yourself that much. Still, I agree with what you say. You have still many things you say but with the little it kind of convinces me on not to buy it. There is nothing else to comment....
ResponderEliminarThomas this is the type of paragraph Mr Marks wanted people to write. You express your own opinion and the reality of this artifact.You are right about the fact that if you are in a big city it is a bad idea to have one. They are portable but they still take space and are uncomfortable for some people. Another thing I liked about your paragraph is that you proof red for spelling and grammatical errors.
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Your paragraph was really well written Tommy. Good job. It had no mistakes, it was flawless. Not only that but I also agree with your comment on the video. I also think that this new technology is amazing. I think that things are definitely going forward too fast. Keep it with the good work Thomas!
ResponderEliminarThomas, I had never thought of some of the ideas you gave us! It is just amazing how you know to express YOUR own opinions without caring what other things. I agree that this device wouldn't be such of a great deal in a big city. I think that it will be a really expensive device in the future and that it would be so awesome to have one but also a waste of money. I think that interacting with nature is important but if you really want to interact with nature go for a run instead of going for a blog.
ResponderEliminarThis is a great paragraph. I totally agree with you, the new technology has both bad and good advantages. This will help us to have an easier life but it is true that its going to be very expensive.
ResponderEliminarTommy, I love new things too! I totally agree with you! I also agree eith u with the security problem...We are so exposed to the technology and internet...I think too that u should proofread your paragraph and try to put together ur thoguth and then write them...Though, u did a great job..
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